Re: Flat Earth Poem

by Bro on Sat Jul 08, 2017 12:49 am

voyager wrote:the haikus are great!
and they are my preferred way
to communicate

BRO wrote:
O..M..G ---

Its a HaiKu Off... Belly Up To The Bar Boys... Sock It To Me Bro ! ---- (Check That Out -- It's Horizontal Ku... )

by Bro on Sat Jul 08, 2017 12:59 am

voyager wrote:
(...see what I did there ^)
(get ready for some reading)
HAIKUPOCALYPSE!

BRO wrote:
The Only Problem
With A Haiku Is You Just
Get Started and Then...

by Bro on Sat Jul 08, 2017 1:03 am

Voyager wrote:
evolving onward
perpetually forward
the circle unseen

BRO wrote:
Creativity
Conceptualization
Opportunity…

by Bro on Sat Jul 08, 2017 1:08 am

Voyager wrote:
the mindless don't mind
had they thought to try to know
they would think again

BRO wrote:
I Have A PhD
Brilliant - Renown - Genius - Me !
Shit, Where Is My Key…

by Bro on Sat Jul 08, 2017 1:11 am

voyager wrote:
who am I to judge
my perspective wanders far
yet I see the clouds

BRO wrote:
Oh Death, Be Not Proud
Nothing Can Touch Or Hurt Me
I Was Aborted…

by Bro on Sat Jul 08, 2017 1:23 am

BRO wrote:
My Ku is All Gone
Voyager Wins The Princess
I Must Kiss A Toad...

by voyager on Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:13 am

BRO wrote:
O..M..G ---

Its a HaiKu Off... Belly Up To The Bar Boys... Sock It To Me Bro ! ---- (Check That Out -- It's Horizontal Ku... )

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Hilariousness, These totally made my day, Valient effort!

BRO wrote:

My Ku is All Gone
Voyager Wins The Princess
I Must Kiss A Toad...

niggas be triflin
my haiku skills be stiflin
*drop the microphone*

by bengbeng on Fri Jul 21, 2017 11:55 pm

i dont know wtf you guys are doing but this is poetry

like the clit on the pussy of our lives
eric make us want to shout
they lie they lie
but the truth will never die
now the jew look like a rat
and the world has turned flat

thank you, thank you mister eric dubay
thats all i really wanted to say.

by bengbeng on Tue Jul 25, 2017 4:59 pm

sorry guys i dont really know the rules of poetry
but i also want to play
so live whit it

today everyone is poor
and that makes them always want more
the resson for this is sure
our leader is a whore
rotten to the core

time to settle the score

by bengbeng on Tue Jul 25, 2017 5:08 pm

whit blindingly white teeth
begging at my feet
want me to buy there shieet
esc,esc ctrl alt del

by Bro on Wed Jul 26, 2017 1:18 am

bengbeng wrote:whit blindingly white teeth
begging at my feet
want me to buy there shieet
esc,esc ctrl alt del

Nice... I like how you have the mind of the reader extend your word 'del' to the acutal word delete in their mind... thereby creating a rhyming of it with 'shieet'...

and so... In honor of all those who ramble on and on... and rarely get to the point... or overdue the point...

BRO wrote:
I Think Therefore I’m
Autobiographical
Omit Needless Words…

by bengbeng on Wed Jul 26, 2017 9:17 pm

thanks

but to be fair i probably seen it used similar in other places and just copyed it.
can you tell me the basic rules? so i dont offend any one whit my ignorance

by Bro on Thu Jul 27, 2017 4:27 am

bengbeng wrote:thanks but to be fair i probably seen it used similar in other places and just copyed it.
can you tell me the basic rules? so i dont offend any one whit my ignorance

No rules to poetry... Like no rules to love... Your free form poetry was great.

Voyager and I were just sharing creative HaiKu poetry format with each other... Poetry can come in any form and any cadence... any style... like the millions of different styles of musical expression.

But if one wants to express creative prose (Poetry) in a old Asian structured format (many Japanese especially are fond of this format) they can choose to do it in the formal 5/7/5 Creative Haiku Format... known around the world.

Which is...

Formal Haiku Structure... A 3 Line Poetic Expression of Any Nature.

First Line: 5 Syllables / Second Line: 7 Syllables / Third Line: 5 Syllables.

With the first two lines (usually) being the mental setup and the last line (usually) being the punch line /shock line /humor line / the oh my line/the elegant line... Its the revelation line.

For example... Here is a new 5/7/5 Formal Haiku...

Time Is Eternal
Infinity Of Lifetimes
Don’t Be Late Today…

So the first line 5 Syllables (Time (one syllable)... Is (one syllable)... Eternal (3 syllables)) so 1 +1 +3 = 5 syllables

Second Line 7 syllables (Infinity (4 syllables)... Of (one syllable)... Lifetimes(2 syllables) so 4 + 1 + 2 = 7 syllables

Third Line 5 syllables (Don't (one syllable)... Be (one syllable)... Late (one syllable)... Today (two syllables) so 1+1+1+2 = 5

Thus the 5 - 7 - 5 format.

Its just a way to blend Yin Poetry (Creativity, Expansive, Inspiring -- Prose Energy) with Yang Structure (a locked format of 5-7-5)... putting a circle within a square within a circle... etc.

Check Google for info on the Haiku format... and here is link to syllable count website of any word or combo of words you want to use... To count you number of syllables in any line... https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/

But even this formal Haiku format has evolved over the past centuries... and their are Haiku formats that are of different count.

Anyway... Its just a fun way of putting elegance or prose or creativity or inspiration or humor or pathos into a formal structure which forces you to be creative and disciplined at the same time... which is a kind of inner rush... tying both sides of the brain together to produce a creative result... something greater than the whole.

T'was rumored that that many Japanese Samurai (martial artists ?) would compose a last Haiku before battle so they would center themselves, calm their mind and also leave something behind in case they did not return.

Play with it... It is just a tool of creativity... It Lets off Creative Steam... But all Poetry Is Just Creativity Disguised In Words.

"I Create Therefore I Am" --- is as good as any other prose shared and there is no structure there except simplicity.

BRO

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